Tuesday, October 10, 2006

From Donald Barthelme's Snow White (Commonplace Book)

Then we went out to wash the buildings. Clean buildings fill your eyes with sunlight, and your heart with the idea that man is perfectible. Also they are good places to look at girls from, those high, swaying wooden platforms: you get a rare view, gazing at the tops of their red and gold and plum-colored heads. Viewed from above they are like targets, the plum-colored head the center of the target, the wavy navy skirt the bold circumference. The white or black legs flopping out in front are like someone waving his arms over the top of the target and calling, "You missed the center by not allowing sufficiently for the wind!" We are very much tempted to shoot our arrows into them, those targets. You know what that means. But we also pay attention to the buildings, gray and noble in their false architecture and cladding. There are Tiparillos in our faces and heavy jangling belts around our waists, and water in our buckets and squeegees on our poles. And we have our beer bottles up there too, and drink beer for a second breakfast, even though that is against the law, but we are so high up, no one can be sure. It's too bad Hogo de Bergerac isn't here with us, because maybe the experience would be good for him, would make him less loathsome. But he would probably just seize the occasion to perform some new loathsome act. He would probably just throw beer cans down into the street, to make irritating lumps under the feet of those girls who, right this minute, are trying to find the right typewriter, in the correct building.

4 comments:

Thivai Abhor said...

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Pat Moler said...

I don't understand the relevance. More than likely, because I haven't read the book; nor do I understand the context.

Björninn said...

I actually think it works fine all on its own. Just a nice piece of sunshine. The similie "like someone waving his arms over the top of the target and calling, "You missed the center by not allowing sufficiently for the wind!" " is such subtle overkill, it's just perfect.

Geoff Klock said...

Just read it out loud a few times. Just the word choice and the syntax are hilarious.